By - potatopopr
*whom* he has labeled
i honestly really appreciate any kind of feedback
Sounds good so far , definetly got potential maybe give the child abit more of a story/screen time whether it’s a dream they have or love interest just more substance to them. But love it man!
Oh my, thank you for the award!
Remember this is a vague outline and i’m currently editing details so I can send to a writer tomorrow to hear their thoughts. Thank you sosososo much