*whom* he has labeled

i honestly really appreciate any kind of feedback

Sounds good so far , definetly got potential maybe give the child abit more of a story/screen time whether it’s a dream they have or love interest just more substance to them. But love it man!

Oh my, thank you for the award! Remember this is a vague outline and i’m currently editing details so I can send to a writer tomorrow to hear their thoughts. Thank you sosososo much