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[OC] Afinity Park #15; The Wonder Twins Pt. 2

[OC] Afinity Park #15; The Wonder Twins Pt. 2

Politop1

I wanna see the longer intro! With more sparkles!✨✨✨✨ ~~Salts seems to be having a great time~~ And Tiny is 100% correct! Looks great as always!


BluCondorr

I only had 4 panels to rock it, the longer intro gonna have to wait 😫


Politop1

Nooooooooooooooo ​ ​ ​ ^(that’s fair)


BluCondorr

Welcome the Wonderful Wonder Twins! Shoutout to u/Hinata_17 for the character creation of Ayumu the Kirlia Thanks to my college friend for his creation of Ayumu's partner in crime Salts [WE HAVE AN AP INDEX:](https://www.reddit.com/user/BluCondorr/comments/poshvr/oc_afinity_park_the_collection_index/?utm_medium=android_app&utm_source=share)


Hinata_17

Huzzah!


BluCondorr

Thank you for allowing me to bring your DND character into my character world 🌎 I appreciate it


Hinata_17

Anytime! Ayumu's radiance must be shared with the world!


Aidmobile

I love them so much!!! The red and yellow background with the final kapow! They're precious and I love them. They're my duel personalities


BluCondorr

I definitely wanted to make this page dynamic so I'm glad it worked out XD.


Aidmobile

It worked out in spades! I love it


ItsEvLads

This has May and Max vibes


TheFox6113

Let's get it


BluCondorr

Let's get this bread


shaunna_thedork

i love this page!! :3 although i could be super nitpicky & say salts is colored green & pink in the previous comic <.< but only cuz i appreciate the level of detail you include in every panel


BluCondorr

Watchu taaaaaalkin about fam? I totally didn't just make him shiny after realizing this fact as well. Just roll with it fam 🀫. Anywho glad ya enjoying the comic πŸ™


shaunna_thedork

fam huh? does that mean i'm getting a character too? XD only kidding [sort of]


TheFox6113

It's just an optical illusion obviously my man condorr just so accurate he can make us see 2 colors love it xD


shaunna_thedork

my bad, i should've known u/blucondorr is streets ahead :)


TheFox6113

I guess we were just Streets Behind as pierce would say


JCorby17

Absolutely glorious! Also I findy it funny how the literal shiny PokΓ©mon is not β€œshiny”, if you get what I mean. Keep up the excellent work!


BluCondorr

They're both shiny, Salts on the outside and Ayumu on the inside


JCorby17

Something like that


Angel_of_Mischief

Omg this makes me so happy. They are adorable


BluCondorr

Much thanks πŸ™


samurott1

Don't know what you were going for, but I'm reminded of Team Rocket from the anime with that intro... ~~also I agree with Tiny here~~ Anyway, another great page this is! Actually, I think this might be one of the better ones, and that's saying something. ~~but that won't last long because the upcoming pages with Jack are bound to be objectively better by default~~


shaunna_thedork

haha i totally heard jessie & james in my head while reading XD


BluCondorr

Thats good then, means I did my job well


BluCondorr

I most definitely was inspired by team rocket for the first 2 panels. Wanted to have some shenanigannery with personality ✌


GIORNO-phone11-pro

yeah someone needs to grab some duck tape for them


BluCondorr

Only for Ayumu 🀣


GIORNO-phone11-pro

Or maybe just a shadow ball user


Hinata_17

N E V E R


Laurenshua

Guy, I love your drawing style, then I checked your profile a bit and I love it more now!


BluCondorr

Bless πŸ™


Nuclearwhale79

My man i think u know me to well cuz I damn near thought exactly wut tiny said ~~their products being a tad shoddy why I cant imagine that being the case lol~~


BluCondorr

Always my boy, I would hope that I know one of my best homies well at this point


Player-0002

You have made me smile. :)


BluCondorr

Glad I could brighten your day πŸ‘


ColdIron27

I need a pokeball. I need that shiny ralts.


BluCondorr

Not if I catch him first 😈


thisismydecoyaccount

This page is really popping! The Wonder Twins look so good.


Kapiork

Great work! Very well done!


Shaggus50

This is great.


PreStormz22

β€œWould u believe me if I told you the intro used to be longer?” absolutely sent me 🀣 Lovely page as always.


BluCondorr

Bless up my boy πŸ™


correiagnd

That intro was indeed long but we can accept it since its's part of Afinity Park's univers!


TheFox6113

Bro you made me smile man pog art πŸ˜ŠπŸ‘


BluCondorr

Gassing me for no reason fam


LightningSphere13

Salt is the supportive yet tired and done with everything while Ayumu is passionate and optimistic


HAMSTERSARECOOL

I never knew I needed this.


BluCondorr

🀣 I would argue that u don't but I do appreciate the sentiment πŸ™


sabrinamcm

This is so cute and wholesome 😊


Ya_Boiiiiiiiii_Rem

Thwy are literally Jessie and James